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25 August 2008 @ 12:21 am
Fanfictionl: Gentlemen  
title: Gentlemen
word count: 1456
rating: PG for language
characters: Inami, Hikitsu
notes: Set during chapter whatever it is in Inami's brothel. Inami meets Hikitsu for the first time when he comes in looking to buy none other than Takiko and Uruki.

( I am pretending to be an lj-cut )
 
 
 
Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 25th, 2008 04:51 am (UTC)
Me thinks Inami doth protests too much. And is a wee bit jealous.

However this does fit in with her words later to Takiko about girls like her since Inami doesn't know about Uruki's "special abilities."
the winds of heavenlodesterre on August 25th, 2008 05:11 am (UTC)
Heh. Yeah, she should have taken his offer with no questions. I guess it's a bit ooc. ^^; Did the jealously come off that strongly? I didn't really mean for it to. Whoops.

Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 25th, 2008 05:15 am (UTC)
Well it fits in how she first reacted to Takiko, because she reminds her of herself when she was younger. Now considering the circumstances (mostly the fact that she doesn't know Uruki is actually male), it could have crossed her mind that Hikitsu was Takiko's love when she found out who Takiko really was. I mean, it obviously couldn't have been Tomite if he was able to go through the "selling" process easier.

Mostly the jealousy I see coming is through circumstances rather than jealousy of having Hikitsu.
the winds of heavenlodesterre on August 25th, 2008 10:04 am (UTC)
Wow, you are picking up on things I only *barely* thought of while writing.

You are SUCH a good reader. XD ♥
Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 25th, 2008 01:02 pm (UTC)
You forgot to mention likes is desperate for fanfiction in her favourite fandoms. Since you're regular updater, I have some regular GK material. Plus I'm seeing this before next spring. XD
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Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 25th, 2008 11:48 pm (UTC)
Aren't a good number of us old and frail because we remember when the first FY came out? ^0^
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Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 26th, 2008 12:36 pm (UTC)
You feel unimaginably old when someone, particularly a very young someone that you were not so long ago, comes up and says wow what a new series FY is and you realize they're talking about GK ^-^; (Not to mention any 80s references you understand.)
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Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 26th, 2008 06:46 pm (UTC)
You wouldn't be amazed at how many are ashamed of just the 90's references. *shakes head* It was a different world back then I tell ya!
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Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 26th, 2008 11:44 pm (UTC)
The horror, though I do remember wanting to be a Power Ranger back when it was original. Brittany Spears...oy vay.

As far as I can remember, the 90's didn't have anything that definitive in fashion sense...well except that everything was either cut higher and with more material.
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Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 26th, 2008 11:57 pm (UTC)
I liked the original Red Ranger and I did have a soft spot for the second Black Ranger. Still can't believe what happened for the Pink Rangers *shakes head*

I think the 90's was the decade required to recover from the three decades before it!

Oh so true. This current decade I keep thinking the decade of fast trends, particularly revivals. I saw MC Hammer pants in a store recently ;p
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Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 27th, 2008 12:41 am (UTC)
I believe it should have been called the tale of Two Pink Rangers. You see the second one came by while she was under a spell of Rita. Basically spy on them as her other form was a cat; imaginably enough, her name was Katherine, how utterly original. Anyway, she stole Kimberly's Power Coin and well the power started fading off her that by the time Katherine returned it, it was moot point. And what do ya know, by then, Zordon proclaimed Kim's time as a Ranger was over anyway so she went on to pursue gymnastics. She also broke up with Tommy via a Dear John letter, not that it mattered as he was starting to have feelings for Kat. I don't believe he saw her again till the Turbo Force movie. And it's really sad I actually remember this too.

And... MC hammer pants? Seriously? This *is* a decade of trying to be Old Skool!

For serious. *nods solemnly* Mind you, they tried to pass them off as harem pants or wide-legged trousers.
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Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 27th, 2008 01:31 am (UTC)
Yep, tell me about it. It was dramafest all the way.

Except I guess, for all the kids who don't know MC Hammer pants. Erm, is that possible? XD

It's possible at this point to know them as Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru pants if they're anime fans ^_~
the winds of heavenlodesterre on August 27th, 2008 02:08 pm (UTC)
That alternative is far worse! XD
Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 27th, 2008 02:31 pm (UTC)
But the alternative to that would be explaining who M.C. Hammer is O_O;
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Ebontien: One Daythefireisblack on August 27th, 2008 02:48 pm (UTC)
It's usually more difficult to kill a fashion statement, because when in doubt, they always look back at history for "inspiration". In other words, they might come up with something worse ~_~;